Feed back on thi ssong would b greatly appreciated bcuz...I'm not 2 sure of its structure...so if my fellow writers wouldnt mind taking a look pepping game on it...id reallly really aprreciate it....
Reckless Household
(Verse I)
This household is reckless
My mind stepping into lunacy and my feet are deck less
I can?t take it on these premises another fucking minute
That?s why I?m clutching this pen with white knuckles, as my anger I start spilling it
Falling into an never-ending ditch,
Arguing with everyone even the worms in the earth
And that because they?re the ones who seen me crawl into my birth
The wind blows lightly and if I remain at this address a minute longer
My bones will eventually fade, but in reality my soul?s muscles will grow stronger
I really don?t wanna stay though, cause my feelings is
That nobody in the family is understanding me, so I?m hollering ?Mothafukas is yall felling this???
I can?t take all the squabbling and brawling from both of my parents
I?m set to end the ?bound by blood? family ?marriage?
No longer can I ride under the same roof as these two people
Porque no entinden el dolor que yo miro
No entiended las cosas que se revelan antes estos ojos
Nis las lagrimas que los termina dejando rojos
El rio de agua salada que corre sobre mis cachetes
A mis venas navajas del tama?o de machetes
I fucking swear to God these walls is talking to me
And these fucking demons is stalking me
Whispering evil thoughts in my ear
I guess they want me to grow angrier and take my pains out with liquor and beer
I know I?d soon become a dangerous alcoholic
That?s why to me my soberness is so symbolic
Yet there?s another addiction that starts to grown in my brain
Spreading pain
On this lined paper, welcome to the fucking rap game
It?s like a medicine or Vatican
So I?m letting you know nigga Ima win, like it or not!
(Chorus)
WWIII 101
My very own land of the gun
Wild ass household
Parents got me feeling like the weather going coooldd..
Grab my pen and pad?I?m starting to unfooold
Baby girl you put so much hope in my life
Just put so much strength in my battle through this strife
(Verse II)
As I tell you my story there?s fury and despite in each sentence
It?s reminding me of society not accepting my soldier?s mentes
Time to make big choices in life
The public sees me as a kid, but I be sensing a grown man?s wits cause I done see so much strife
Soul feels like its 63
Yet with momma I stay arguing
Yelling and bickering
Tripping, kicking up dust
And neither one of us
Wanna make it seem like we give a fuck
I really can?t stand it in this infernal place
Living alongside another beast full of rage
I gotta jet before I bust his grill
I?m feelin? take my ass above to a hill
Stand at the top with an AK and my bullets just drill
Into the brain
Of every single hateful thing I have inside my loathing clogged veins
Murder gon? be the case that they give me
Cause I?m emptying shells into all the evil shit that seems to shift me
Into the total darkness
Please understand that this soldier is stop less
Sometimes kicking a demonic verse or chorus
But only to tell you how it is round my neck of the forest
How the pain is felt through these pores
Though I try to stay straight up holy in the brain
And enter the Lord?s heavenly ?game?
Cause I?m telling you my conquest is too near
For some punk ass evil spirit to come and make me peer
Into another road full of wicked trickery
I done withstood too many years chillin? with misery
You can?t stop my mental grind
Technique was right success is psychological, so you can?t block my pad and pencil shine
You can?t prevent the lead on this recycled tree
So I bring to you a new breed
Of soulja
Just a few wks ago I was trying to put a slug in my wig, but I just realized it aint ova?
Shit this is just the beginning, it?s another start
Rhymes now being the beat to my heart
And my lil momma the complete set of auto parts
To my engine
My motivation to wake and see the sun, she must be like a heart surgeon
Cause she ripped my heart from its roots
Stole it, but of instead killing, she stitched it back together like a tailored suit
She gave it life, gave it an extra energizing thrust
Kicked up the dust
Now I?m sure this passion is more than just fucking lust!
(Chorus)
(Verse III)
Now momma she crying, my head out the window acting like I don?t give a fuck
Cause why should I be bothered by her tears if she aint never paid attention to mine?
Why should I be budged by her pains if to my heart she never cosigned
But as I sit chillin, her eyes still red I do the cross sign
Say a quick word to the Lord
And then let it go?.
China, your image spreads through my veins
I wanna be by your side, but it seems my underageness gots me in chains
With so few years on my deck it?d be hard to survive
Though stripes are abundant on my uniform, so fuck strife
I?m used to it
Just like being called a weirdo, I?m accustomed to it
Ten thousand chips on my shoulder
And baby I need you to hold up this soldier
Breathing hard, panting, because it seems like life is almost ova?
I cry so much my eyes is dry, they starting to crack
Simon I wanna hold your hands in mine, that?s a fucking fact!
Like Babe Ruth and baseball stats
I?m inhaling a bit better now
As I come closer to ending this letter now
China just come to me, I?m going nuts, fucking crazy
With you on my mind, these hoe ass niggas will NEVER fade me!
But it is a thin line
So look deep into my eyes
And please remind me that my heart is really kind
(Chorus)
