veronica (i want u)

[Dark Mexican]

night my love xx

 

[Verónica]

night.:]

 

[Dark Mexican]

go 2 sleep lol laterz boo

 

[jayC]

my future baby mother not just sexual but intellectual,
very sensative and shy,
comfort type lay ur head on my chest when u cry,
deepest eyes and most beautiful hair,
i wud snap if u cut it,
i get weak and u no its u that does it,
hold me in ur arms u no that i love it,
no one can touch dis,
inch budge dis,
dudes mess wid u i'll be the first to cut em,
split the weight on ur pressures and stress,
no babes i'll nvr let u go loveless,
sometimes i no u wana keep it all ya self,
sometimes i no u think that no body can help,
but im here 4 u beautiful n thats 4ever,
as long as u stay truthful n thats 4ever,
i want u,

ur kisses and ur touch will contribute to da way dat i love u so much,
when u bless me wid my third child my third real smile,
in the long run its all worth while,
i told u out the darkness that there became light,
dont worry bout the past life our future shines bright,
like most couples we argue and fight,
but breakin up na we just 2 tight,
i'll b by u on ur darkest hour,
my romantic flower,
i promise i wont let this relationship turn sour,
everything i do is 4 u and my baby boys 2,
cus yall so beautiful,
life without u just wouldnt b fair,
its a life we'll build,
and a life we'll share,
i want u,

ur as sweet as the come,
second 2 none,
my whole world in one,
u and my 2 sons,
im not guna lie,
im a avarage guy,
i make the same mistakes,
i still fall 4 fakes,
ur the best,
no girl can test,
if it wasnt 4 u i still b a mess,
no more drama,
shys ur future baby father,
shy will take care of u,
share with u,
b there 4 u,
i feel ur fears,
i hear ur tears,
but im feelin u,
like we been datin 4 yrs,
i feel tingly inside,
i cant describe,
ur always on my mind,
i love u more than much,
i need more of ur touch,
i need u like drugs,
i feed off ur love,
always guna want u.
always guna need u,
when u get home,
i'll always b there 2 greet u,
u my boo,
u so true,
everything i do,
is 4 my boys and u,
i want u

Lame

 

[Dark Mexican]

Lame

oh lord, and this guy thinks hes mature, but yet again i really dont care what U think, my girl loves it, thats all the matters :]

 

[jayC]

right buddy, that little body of water called the Atlantic Ocean can't hold a hopeless romantic with mad poetic skills like you back. :]

 

[Dark Mexican]

yes i no, im actually blessed

 

[jayC]

bro no offense. but that is probably the worst poem I've ever read. I think I'm going to send that to everyone I know. Ya know with the mood in this country being so somber I figure that piece of trash will make for a few laughs. Please write more.

 

[Dark Mexican]

if u scroll down u'll see loads more, then u can send all my 'trash' to ur homies, what can i say people just get obsessed with me, now since ur in love with my ass create a thread and hop off this one, this is 4 my girl

 

[Verónica]

Jayc ....what The Hell You Trippin Over ....anyway, You Need To Quit Hatin On My Bubu.......anyway...lol.......

 

[DoeMemba]

bro no offense. but that is probably the worst poem I've ever read. I think I'm going to send that to everyone I know. Ya know with the mood in this country being so somber I figure that piece of trash will make for a few laughs. Please write more.

ever heard of spoken words? its not really poetry dumbass...that has to do less wit rhymes and more poetic language. but the proper saying is spoken words..and who cares what u think...it wasn't written to you

 

[Dark Mexican]

he only hatin cus i made him look stupid in the otha thread

 

[DoeMemba]

sum people need to understand difference between poetry and spoken words....to be honest, i dont even do real poetry...i just rap...aka spoken words...poetry is literature.

but yeh shy...fuk that nigga he just hatin coz we have more skills than him

 

[Dark Mexican]

he needs to suck suttin lol and hop off me lol