• Create Account

    In less than 1 min, By registering, you'll be able to discuss, chat, share and private message with other members of our community. All 100% free

    SignUp Now!

vs lil poet

DoeMemba

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jun 14, 2006
Messages
19,467
Best answers
0
*cracks knuckles and grabs the mic*

1...2...1...2....

mic check...

Crack Your Dome And Throat!,
Cause To Me Your Only A Second String Like You Cloned a Rope
Punch Ya Face Till Your Nose Is Broke !!
And Shove "Heated-Bread-Through-Your-Subconcious"
Cause one stroke To The Head'll Leave You Coma-Toast/Comatose'd

Trashin This Dope!,
Better Yet Like Jumping-Clowns Im Bashing-This-Joke!
Your Ass Is A Hoax,
Cause Like Preforming-Oral-On-Employee's doe'll Leave A Staff-In-His-Throat!!

no time to boast, you straight up a waste kid...
these punches'll leave a bad taste
n your mouth from this lyrical amazement,
snuff-ya face in til you facelift

You pursue this?
Hell nah!! Talking bout 'lacking baseball heroes' is the only time he spit Ruthless
Cuz you will only hear Lyrics scream
"I land punches" when he askin for Tropical Fruit Juices!

this bitch'll retire, and reason it'll be like "tragic murders on sitcoms',
he lost his will after suffering a fall from grace..
keep up with my pace and get in this brawl,
you above me ? i'll throw you off an airplane like porn directors in autumn.........wish you had a "pair of shoots for being fucked in the fall"


who you callin weak, kid?fucku
 
Last edited:

Lil Poet

Member
Joined
Feb 21, 2007
Messages
346
Best answers
0
*cracks knuckles and grabs the mic*

1...2...1...2....

mic check...

Crack Your Dome And Throat!, Cause To Me Your Only A Second String Like You Cloned a Rope///Punch Ya Face Till Your Nose Is Broke !!
And Shove "Heated-Bread-Through-Your-Subconcious" Cause one stroke To The Head'll Leave You Coma-Toast/Comatose'd

Trashin This Dope!, Better Yet Like Jumping-Clowns Im Bashing-This-Joke!
Your Ass Is A Hoax,Cause Like Preforming-Oral-On-Employee's doe'll Leave A Staff-In-His-Throat!!

no time to boast, you straight up a waste kid...these punches'll leave a bad taste in your mouth from this lyrical amazement, snuff-ya face in til you facelift

You pursue this? Hell nah!! Talking bout 'lacking baseball heroes' is the only time he spit Ruthless
Cuz you will only hear Lyrics scream "I land punches" when he askin for Tropical Fruit Juices!

this bitch'll retire, and reason it'll be like "tragic murders on sitcoms', he lost his will after suffering a fall from grace..
keep up with my pace and get in this brawl, you above me ? i'll throw you off an airplane like porn directors in autumn.........wish you had a "pair of shoots for being fucked in the fall"


who you callin weak, kid?fucku

(looks at oponent, looks down, then busts out laughing)

snatchez away the mike...........

yo,

I dont have time to kick or punch
i'll just shoot your ass, and feed you 2 my dawgz 4 lunch
I just smoked a lumpy, so i feel lil grumpy
pigz gonna fly before you ever punk me
Every single one of your words is stupid
after this battle consider your self booted
you and your raps need a serious makeover
i spit out rymes and do a lyrical takeover
I'll hit you in the mouth an crack ya fake grill
maybe when you wake up you'll actualy have skill
My flow is monsterous yours is itsy bitsy
You cant get a girl so you turned strickly dickly
I'll step into your face and call you a puto,
No te tengo miedo y punto.


I'm calling you weak, pendejo.......:cool: :D :cool:
 

DoeMemba

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jun 14, 2006
Messages
19,467
Best answers
0
thinking.jpg

^^^^LOL^^^^^^^^^^^^


LIL POET ..YOU MORE LIKE NON-SENSE RHYMER
I SEEN BETTER LYRICS ON BLUES CLUES, YOU MUHFUCKIN NO TIMER!


Where you get the mind you can rid of me lyrically, nigga im massive with a flow and delivery like obese pregnancy..//
i surpass your petty rhymes scheme, i seen a new level of greatness like seein thru nastradamus universal complexity..//
my style forms crack, white to blunt ashes and drop a verse deeper than your anatomy...
i define gravity so rapidly so i push yo lil head to your skull like exploirin brain cavity..//
 
Last edited:

Lil Poet

Member
Joined
Feb 21, 2007
Messages
346
Best answers
0
that all you could come up wit
fuck it, i'd rather battle a puppet
I asked for some competition
insted i get some lonley nigga wishin'
he could take my position
Man, i'll hurt you so bad you'll probably start crying,
You could win an ugly contest with out trying,
somebody call 911, this niggaz lyrics are dying
I'm the flyest
you can't deny this
your ballz are like grapes, but mine like papayas.
My lyrics do kung fu moves
your a gangsta who watches blues clues.
Like Pancho Villa or Zapata, I'm a Mexican hero
write ryhmes for sesame street you pinche weirdo.
 

Lil Poet

Member
Joined
Feb 21, 2007
Messages
346
Best answers
0
dawg.....all your big wordz won't work if your public dosen't understand them. Try being more simple. The public alwayz decides who winz, not you.
 

DoeMemba

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jun 14, 2006
Messages
19,467
Best answers
0
dawg.....all your big wordz won't work if your public dosen't understand them. Try being more simple. The public alwayz decides who winz, not you.

i feel sorry for you if you think my vocabulary was too big for you.....


have you ever been introduced to m3taphors and wordplay?
 

DoeMemba

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jun 14, 2006
Messages
19,467
Best answers
0
that all you could come up wit
fuck it, i'd rather battle a puppet
I asked for some competition
insted i get some lonley nigga wishin'
he could take my position
Man, i'll hurt you so bad you'll probably start crying,
You could win an ugly contest with out trying,
somebody call 911, this niggaz lyrics are dying
I'm the flyest
you can't deny this
your ballz are like grapes, but mine like papayas.
My lyrics do kung fu moves
your a gangsta who watches blues clues.
Like Pancho Villa or Zapata, I'm a Mexican hero
write ryhmes for sesame street you pinche weirdo.

WARNING: train coming through!
Railroad_Sign.gif

You need a mind of your own to read my lyrics
i gotta mind of my own, i'm my worst CRITIC

AIIGHT...

let me break it down for ya.....in lamen terms...

so that your BRAIN understands...ok?


nigga your lyrics are weak and you ain't makin' me flinch
and your like a mosquito, it's only an itch
i'll choke your neck..so you can stop sendin me ur fungus flows
he's either a dick or a pussy..that's why he stays disclosed
i got it locked like a vender, you a pretender..youre not the KEY
as you read this verse, my palms are getting sweaty
but your intellect level is lower than seeds below the dirt
taking bullets in my chest the only time i'm gettin hurt
fuckin' punk let me break it down
come fuckin step to me and i'll lay you in the ground
trouble i stirred up...make it double if you interupt
make this loss hard to swallow like you guzzlin' syrup
props? i don't need 'em coz i split that crack
and if you grip a gat, then we gon' see this bitch slapped back
you almost shit but your words smellin like urine
everytime you dropped a keystyle...your lap top is soaked in piss
you better kneel when you see my verse, multis and punchlines
think you gettin better with rap..my nigga you aint nothin but lunchtime
while you droppin' verses, i drop bombs in the lab kid
i'm somebody you need to respect coz i come equip wit facts kid
 

Lil Poet

Member
Joined
Feb 21, 2007
Messages
346
Best answers
0
WARNING: train coming through!
Railroad_Sign.gif

You need a mind of your own to read my lyrics
i gotta mind of my own, i'm my worst CRITIC

AIIGHT...

let me break it down for ya.....in lamen terms...

so that your BRAIN understands...ok?


nigga your lyrics are weak and you ain't makin' me flinch
and your like a mosquito, it's only an itch
i'll choke your neck..so you can stop sendin me ur fungus flows
he's either a dick or a pussy..that's why he stays disclosed
i got it locked like a vender, you a pretender..youre not the KEY
as you read this verse, my palms are getting sweaty
but your intellect level is lower than seeds below the dirt
taking bullets in my chest the only time i'm gettin hurt
fuckin' punk let me break it down
come fuckin step to me and i'll lay you in the ground
trouble i stirred up...make it double if you interupt
make this loss hard to swallow like you guzzlin' syrup
props? i don't need 'em coz i split that crack
and if you grip a gat, then we gon' see this bitch slapped back
you almost shit but your words smellin like urine
everytime you dropped a keystyle...your lap top is soaked in piss
you better kneel when you see my verse, multis and punchlines
think you gettin better with rap..my nigga you aint nothin but lunchtime
while you droppin' verses, i drop bombs in the lab kid
i'm somebody you need to respect coz i come equip wit facts kid


um............were's the train????

I said make your raps simpler,but you made them retarded
you should have known better than to ever have started
Lil Poet's the king, but your straight garbage.
i rather battle my grandma, she rhymes hella better
i'll make your raps leave you for me, you won't even get a letter.
I'm the brutalist battler you'll ever face
i'll snatch your heart out your chest and throw it back at ya face.
Jack my rymes since you can't produce any
I'll still smoke you, like as if it was 4/20
I'll make your ego collapse
with these fast ass advanced raps
make you feel bad, like a girl wearin' tampax
gangsta, gangsta cholo, cholo
get out my face and don't come back solo
cuz i'll split your wig from ear to ear
this battle rap is ending hear.
I'm pulling the plug on you and your vocab.
(now the line went flat)
poor guy, he wanted to win so bad.
 

la_1_n_only

Linda Mujer
Joined
Jan 3, 2007
Messages
6,798
Best answers
0
well i like em and i guess we got the same mind cuz i know wat you sayin.


lil poet: did you just called your self stupid? cuz you sayin to make it easyer to understand, and not only you made your self look stupid but your callin your audiece stupid too....................wtf is up wit that?
 

Lil Poet

Member
Joined
Feb 21, 2007
Messages
346
Best answers
0
well i like em and i guess we got the same mind cuz i know wat you sayin.


lil poet: did you just called your self stupid? cuz you sayin to make it easyer to understand, and not only you made your self look stupid but your callin your audiece stupid too....................wtf is up wit that?

No, i got mad love for my audience. It was a diss toward his style.
"stupid"............even when i look bad, i look good.
 

DoeMemba

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jun 14, 2006
Messages
19,467
Best answers
0
um............were's the train????

I said make your raps simpler,but you made them retarded
you should have known better than to ever have started
Lil Poet's the king, but your straight garbage.
i rather battle my grandma, she rhymes hella better
i'll make your raps leave you for me, you won't even get a letter.
I'm the brutalist battler you'll ever face
i'll snatch your heart out your chest and throw it back at ya face.
Jack my rymes since you can't produce any
I'll still smoke you, like as if it was 4/20
I'll make your ego collapse
with these fast ass advanced raps
make you feel bad, like a girl wearin' tampax
gangsta, gangsta cholo, cholo
get out my face and don't come back solo
cuz i'll split your wig from ear to ear
this battle rap is ending hear.
I'm pulling the plug on you and your vocab.
(now the line went flat)
poor guy, he wanted to win so bad.



this nigga talkin bout smokin............when he's probly still under age...LMAO!
image-crematory.gif

LET ME LEAD YOU TO THE "NO SMOKING SECTION"


ur attitude must be 'fuck what they say'
coz homie..ain't speakin correct english skippin syllables in his wordplay
your the brutalist? your one of the fewest to co-exist on this board
nigga takin bout 'beatin fags' when he done like 10 guys or more
i'll hook you in ya chest and laugh til ya last breath
and put chu in track to ya desmise like u racin' towards death
c'mon homie, you don't really want it wit me
i cause tragedies so frequently when i drop frees
this slacker is fooled chopped to the smallest particles
when it comes to illness, he "only acts" like gravity during parachutes
you can?t cope?coz all you do is talk shit like ya? ass-spoke
so you can just grasp-hope, but I stay above ya like ya ?last-post? (LOOOL)
im dropping bombs on ya soul ..til ya admit ur my hoe
and you couldn?t drop jaws if spielberg was directin? ready for war
you a flippin faggot you can?t pack with me
you gon? be takin more shots than Courtney love at a heroin factory
 
Last edited:

3sa_Angel

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jan 16, 2007
Messages
8,562
Best answers
0
B........i thought it were good............and if ppl dont understand it they needs to get a brain...........no doubt about that............:p.........cuz even if some rappers dont show their smartness they do have der brain........and B gots a good head on his shoulders no doubt about that........es not his fualt others dont............:)
 

Lil Poet

Member
Joined
Feb 21, 2007
Messages
346
Best answers
0
You like big phrases, well here take this,
Chinga tu puta madre and your gay ass diss.
I'm an assassin, a lyrical criminal
i gaze through my sniperscope, got you locked in my visiual
end your life? all it takes is a simple pull..........
Fuck it, i'll let you live
ain't got time for silly kids
let these witnesses say who the winner is.
I walk away with my head held high
claiming Mexican pride even long after i've died.........:cool:





,Lil Poet
 
Last edited:

DoeMemba

Legendary Poster
Joined
Jun 14, 2006
Messages
19,467
Best answers
0
nigga already admitted to his death
so i'm open fiyah and lay'em to REST............................BLAOW!


you weak bitch..i asumed ya brain exploded
i guess i already left this lame corroted
you fuckin' with a knight like ya battle in the dark (night)
you came half-assed so i'ma swallow ya heart
you can talk yo shyt but you ain't no god
muhfucka! i'ma have ya suicidal tendecies on a hookless rod
imma de-throne his pride, call me a monarchy killa (like the aztecs)
so who's iller? i'm the muhfuckin rebel that'll eat ya liver
so imma stomp on ya brain and leave a rope tied to ya hands
pack ya up faster than marines sent to iran to fight against pakistan
fuck a winner, this ain't about a win bitch
i just wanna ether ya soul from the roof quick
coz i'm on a shine with no strips
stay on my grind, give u a fix...be on ya dime..give her the dick
i'll battle any nigga for a dime or a nick
i spill the clock counterwise, put ya time on condense
so know i'mma mind if ya press..
blown 5 on the trench ..took time to convince
that you just another hater on my muhfuckin dick
but personally im takin more time...snappin the spine on a chick......bitch.
 
Registrarse / Join The Forum

Proud Sponsor

Ad

Top